Your blogs will now be graded on content as well as how well your paragraph is organized! Your response should be at least 5 sentences and should include a topic sentence, at least 3 supporting sentences, and a strong concluding sentence. If you have 3 or more grammar or spelling mistakes, you will lose 10 points.
Here's an example of a well-organized response:
Over Thanksgiving break, I journeyed into the world of Harry Potter with my parents and sister. We woke up early in the morning and beat (almost) everyone to Diagon Alley, the Butter Beer, and Harry's Forbidden Journey ride. The Butter Beer surpassed my expectations; it was sweet, creamy, and left a little white mustache on everyone's lip. We deliberated for quite some time about which wands to buy, and I finally settled on Hermione's green-tinged, leaf-covered one. After dueling in the alleyways, my sister and I went off to brave the other rides in the park. On Thanksgiving day, we spent time in the hot tub before enjoying a traditional feast, ordered from the local grocery store of course! It was an enchanting, memorable vacation, and I would recommend that any Harry Potter fan check out the park!